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kitrapsjasani Started conversation Jan 3, 2008
Entry: A Brief - Asians In Kenya At Turn of 19th Century - A30633338
Author: kitrapsjasani - U10755862
I am interested, currently, on Asians who left India and went to British East Africa - Kenya. The piece I have written, is basic but to the point.
I could have added on more but decided to leave it for the moment.
A30633338 - A Brief - Asians In Kenya At Turn of 19th Century
AlexAshman Posted Jan 3, 2008
Hi kitrapsjasani and welcome to Peer Review!
This looks a good start to an Entry, but I'm sure there's a lot more detail to the matter than this. The Edited Guide (the goal for Entries placed here in Peer Review) is for definitive Entries, and so it would be great if you could extend your Entry a little by adding more of the story.
One resource you might find useful is: http://news.bbc.co.uk/onthisday/hi/dates/stories/february/4/newsid_2738000/2738629.stm
By the way, unless you mean to credit Slacker, you seem to have placed an errant '1' in the Edit the Researcher List box (visible when editing your Entry).
Alex 
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Milos Posted Mar 7, 2008
Do you think you'll do more work on this, kitrapsjasani?
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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Mar 7, 2008
He seems to have re-written a lot of it here: A30640042
A30633338 - A Brief - Asians In Kenya At Turn of 19th Century
Milos Posted Mar 7, 2008
So this can be removed from PR, back to entry?
A30633338 - A Brief - Asians In Kenya At Turn of 19th Century
kitrapsjasani Posted Mar 7, 2008
Hi! This has been completed and has been picked up and is A30640042. I am not sure how to remove this particular one A30633338. Please let me know so as not to confuse it with the other one.
A30633338 - A Brief - Asians In Kenya At Turn of 19th Century
lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Mar 7, 2008
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