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Great imagery...I've only read it over once, and almost every poem deserves at least three, but my first impression is (now it's my turn to be incoherent) plain, easy-to-understand language, imagery(as I said, I could see everything in the poem), no over-complication (a _good_ thing)

And I disentigrate into random babbling. I think I'll refrain from further comment until I have a larger pool to work eith and make generalizations from.

*puddle of random-babbling-formerly-SilverSolstice on floor bubbles, pops, and hisses on the floor)

I can tell you this in plain talk: I like it.

Well, thanks.

That's what I all my poems are like: simple; easy to understand; basic. Remember what I said - I'm not very eloquent!

I'll stick up some others once I build myself up to being able to withstand the mind-numbing tedium of typing them in, word for word...

It's not that bad once you get started. I did all mine in a period of about a week. The biggest thing I had to watch out for was misspellings, from typing so fast. Let me know when you pu more up!

I've put up another poem - a short, rubbishy one because it's quicker.

I have a very short attention span, as you might be able to tell.

Both of the poems that are up there now are ones I wrote in a "stream of consciousness" and I've made very few
alterations to the original type-everything-that-enters-the-brain stage.

I just want to say in my perrenial lack-of-wordsish way that I like your poems, & look forward to seeing more.

Joanna

Well, thankyouverymuch.