h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Another suggestion: the suggestion that they simply try out 'mutual masturbation,' while meant in the best possible sense, could serve only to reinforce the impression that homosexuality is more about sex than relationships.

Additionally, there's no mention of asexuality, or any other sexualities. (I'm sure there are more than the big three; I got two birds-and-the-bees talks, one being from my gay uncle, and I seem to recall at least five or six different sexual 'categories'.) In particular, asexuals are occasionally the subject of discrimination, though it is often improvised - 'pot-plant' is a particularily strange one my ingenious flatmate invented...

Furthermore, I think the reference to someone quotign scripture while in a mutual tossing-session is rather crude for a family site. Let's keep this accessible, eh?

Aside from that, the only other real obstacles were mentioned before - grammar, spelling, style of writing... And the structure is rather haphazard... But it's an attempt to address a sticky subject, and deserves to be applauded for its boldness, at least!

- Jordan