A Conversation for Monument to Peter the Great - Moscow

Peer Review: A28910694 - Monument to Peter the Great - Moscow

Post 1

Secretly Not Here Any More

Entry: Monument to Peter the Great - Moscow - A28910694
Author: Psycorp Six-Oh-Three - What are YOU writing? - U219983

My second for November, inspired by a conversation with B'el and the result of 30 minutes work.

If anyone would like to see a picture (hopefully the entry itself will have one in time), there are two to be found on page 3 of this: http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=38760&l=db725&id=279200088

Cheers, Psyc.


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Post 2

aka Bel - A87832164

We should talk more often, if that inspires you to write entries. smiley - winkeye

I stand by what I said: I don't find it hideous at all - not from the photo, at least.
Nice entry, want to know the mistakes I found? smiley - tongueout


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Post 3

Secretly Not Here Any More

Come on then, let's get it over with!


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Post 4

aka Bel - A87832164

Don't worry, I probably missed most because it's late and I'm tired.



>>it is not the statues size,<< statue's
>> Russian Navy. in 1998 Costing a reputed 11 << Navy in 1998. Costing...

>>life sized frigate << life-sized


>> the Great Monument has been a fantastic << ...had been...


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Post 5

Secretly Not Here Any More

Changes made.


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Post 6

aka Bel - A87832164

Then you'll have to wait for the others to comment now. smiley - smiley


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Post 7

Secretly Not Here Any More

That'll have to wait until tomorrow, as I'm going to watch Predator in bed. I've earned it!


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aka Bel - A87832164

Predator? Well, if you say so... smiley - rofl
Goodnight. smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Fizzymouse- no place like home



Very nice entry you have there Psycorp smiley - applause

All I could spot was "talents", house style is 'talents' I believe.smiley - ok


Isn't beauty in the eye of the beholder Bel.smiley - winkeye


smiley - mouse


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Post 10

Secretly Not Here Any More

Sorted!


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Post 11

Icy North

Nice entry! smiley - ok

You mention the cost in two places. I'd just mention it once.

Do we say "Princess DIana" or should it be "Diana, Princess of Wales"? I'm not sure. (The statue looks like a bloke in drag, in my opinion)

Can you explain VVTs (in a footnote, maybe)

smiley - cheers Icy


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Post 12

Gnomon - time to move on

I'm not sure how worthwhile this Entry is without a picture of the monument, and the pictures you have provided do not really do it justice.


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Post 13

Secretly Not Here Any More

There's quite a good one on the artist's website, but I assume that may raise a copyright question.

I'll make the changes suggested on my break.


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Post 14

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


The Beeb must had some good ones in the archives smiley - smiley


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Post 15

Secretly Not Here Any More

Does anyone know where to look?


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Post 16

Secretly Not Here Any More

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/in_pictures/4749612.stm Picture 8

Is the only BBC picture I can find.


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Gnomon - time to move on

The Editors can search the Beeb archives, but they seem to have only a limited selection available to them. They can't even use pictures that were featured on other BBC websites.


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Secretly Not Here Any More

That's weird. It's a bit intricate for a Community Artist to tackle, isn't it.

What's the concensus then? Nice entry, no real point?


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Post 19

Gnomon - time to move on

If you can find a page on the artist's website that you can post a link directly to, then you can put that link in your entry. You can say somthing like:

To see it in all its hideousness, go to the artist's website.


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Post 20

Secretly Not Here Any More

Simple enough solution! I'll sort it at one-ish!


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