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A28782138 - Eoin Colfer

Link to Hurling: A5403953.

TRiG.

No he hurled the curling stone TRiG! i'll sort those points out thanks TRiG.

doing more but it's going slowly. i've not managed to upload the new version yet as i haven't been near the computer for enough time yet, i'll see if i can do it tomorrow but i can't promise anything.

Right the new version is uploaded. If someone can check it through that would be great!

Anyone?

Looking good although there are a few things I noticed you should clear up a bit

You need to make the other titles of the books headers (the lost colony, opal deception etc.), to break them up. At present it all reads as one and to the unaware it doesn't make much sense (although I do like your short synopsis of each book.

No mention of Mulch? He's as much a player as Foaly. And even more so than Arty's parents.

You haven't appeared to have finished the information about Artemis Fowl Sr. It ends a bit abruptly...

Well on your way though to a nice edition to the Edited Guide.

Thankyou!

Are you able to find any more info on Eoin himself? He's quite a character from what I've read. Perhaps some short quotes from him?
Or even a quote from Artemis about him?

Good idea, i'll add it to my corrections list.

No problem

I recently finished the Lost Colony (again!) so have Fowl on the brain at them moment. I really like Number One

Updated!

*bump*


Any further comments?

You still have curling instead of hurling.

You have curly apostrophes where you should have straight ones.

And surely some of your headers should be subheaders?

I've been staring at a computer screen too long now. Off for a walk. Shall try to read it properly when I get back.

TRiG.

Right I'll change them. Are there any other major changes that i have missed?

I'm wondering whether you need put <> but instead put 'Eoin Colfer - Writer'.

Or 'The Books of Eoin Colfer'. Your choice, and good thinking, Opti!

me good at thinking?

Unfortunately, I think we're still overlooking the point Gnomon made that there is actually an Entry about Artemis Fowl in the EG, and while this could add more information there certainly needs to be more about the author himself in the Entry to enable calling it 'Eoin Colfer and his Books' or the like.

Perhaps this would be best incorporated into the original Entry as an Update.

I think Matt's right.

Agreed. This should not go into the EG as it stands