h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Synthesizers: an overview - A27524360
Author: a_a_e - U8640200

I've lost direction with this a bit I think.

Hello As I'm not acquainted with synthesisers I can't tell you if you are straying off the subject, but I've noticed a few things that you may like to change any how.

I wouldn't shorten the word synthesizers use it in full form throughout your entry.

Read your entry over again. Does it make sense? I'm not sure the following does.

<>

Perhaps define what midi is in your entry. You can still use the link.

You currently have subheaders instead of headers.

Try working in the fifteen footnotes.

Don't use colloquial terms such as 'minging'.

Done some of that.

I don't see the point in header/subheader: they look the same!

Will work on the footnotes...

and now for some links...

>>I don't see the point in header/subheader: they look the same!<<

That's because of a technical problem at the moment with the Brunel *skin*. They should be different sizes, but appear the same at the moment. The techies at h2g2 are aware of it.

If you want to see the difference, try comparing this: http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/A26353686 with this:http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/alabaster/A26353686

I answered this question here and will now swap over to the PR thread to review your entry. See you there

Bother, that second link doesn't work properly. To see the difference click on the first link and then when you're ready, change *brunel* in the URL to *alabaster*

Already done! Cheers

I'll start swapping them round.