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Entry: Torchwood - the TV Series - A26770548
Author: The Apprentice - My Cat Sucks! - U35204

Rescued from the Flea Market - I have expanded on several sections and done some rework. I will definitely have to try and get hold of a few of the episodes to expand the descriptions further - but have purposefully gone for an overview rather than an out-and-out spoiler approach. Nevertheless, the entry does contain spoilers and anyone of a delicate disposition in that respect would be advised not to review it...

The Apprentice

Good to see this back in pr so quickly, I pop back and have a read a little later.

Previous PR entry A21515898 and thread: http: F7025716?thread=4037975

I believe I have covered off the majority (if not all) of the points previously raised in Peer Review - and have, just now, started adding some necessary detail on the Torchwood Hub.

The Apprentice

marking my weekend reading

Although it is well known to many, it may not be as well known or obvious to others, especially to non-UK readers, that Torchwood is an anagram of Doctor Who. It would be a good idea to mention this early on.

Wasn't obvious to me- it took me ages to figure that out. Lucky someone explained Mister Saxon to me eh?

While I appreciate the comment, I don't think the anagram business is so relevant to the piece that it needs mentioning early - but, it is in the Trivia section towards the end.



The Apprentice

missed it!

*skulks away*

Well *I* knew!

Tweaked references to Jack's time agent/conman background. Have been trying to watch current re-runs to see if I can add anything juicy...



The Apprentice

How's it going here Apprentice?

Well, still looking for feedback. Unless someone can identify big holes or glaring errors, I'm basically done.

The Apprentice

Anyone else?

noted

Just for reference, now that I've had my attention drawn back to it, I have completed a bunch of tweaks on the first dozen paragraphs and standardised the episode titles in the text to single quotes, rather than a mix of single quotes and italics.



The Apprentice

Good work, that'll save the sub a job

I'm all for keeping Sub work to a minimum...



The Apprentice

Me too

> As a result of Jack's apparent immortality, some evidence exists that he will ultimately become The Face of Boe, who has played a pivotal role in the ongoing arc of the Doctor Who storyline.

Was this not confirmed in "Last of the Time Lords" (last episode of season 3 of DW)? Or was it only hinted at? In fact, you hint at it again later (at the end of the Torchwood and Doctor Who section), so maybe there's no need to change it.

... oh, and the final footnote - perhaps they are planning to use this in a future episode? [Like whatever was going on in "Blink" when the Doctor met Sally Sparrow, or what the Doctor did to annoy Queen Elizabeth I...]