h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Trusts and Trustees, a Legal Drama - A26642775
Author: Galigan - U1341611

Something I put together at my work experience because there's not much else to do. Guess which department I'm working in?

This is pretty good

My most immediate nitpicks would be to capitalise the subheaders and to add some more h2g2 links.

Alex

Ok, I'll go and do the subheaders but as for links I don't know what entries there are to link to as yet.

Hi there Galigan. This is a nice Entry.
Only sorry your work-experience placement is of such poor quality to allow you to write it. Still, their loss is hootoo's gain

Some corrections for you:

sebject >> subject (1st line)
< change the comma to a dash
<> change the comma to a semi-colon
Those characters that pop up in almost all trusts. >> Those characters that are common to almost all trusts.
knows >> known
suggest dropping the starting 'These are', and changing the comma to a semi-colon
a full-stop is needed at the end of footnote 3

Don't worry too much about the links, a sub will do some for you if necessary. (I'll probably be 'd for saying this)
Just make sure that any links you do add are to Edited Guide Entries only, otherwise they'll be removed later.

...told you.

Soooo predictable these subs

Thanks h5ringer, those changes have been done.

from me too

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I trust you're pleased with this, Galigan

Indeed so. A good thing to get out of 2 weeks working.

Hope we are going to see more from you. Well done

Yes, well done Galigan

*thinks about flinging another after h5ringer*