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Alternative Writing Workshop: A2653689 - That certain something

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U645857

Entry: That certain something - A2653689
Author: Flameofgold - U645857

A tale about love and wisdom which can be found in the most unexpected places.


A2653689 - That certain something

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J

We missed this one for a week? smiley - erm

It's very good smiley - ok The ending makes you want to read it again - to see if there is any foreshadowing or how you described Jonathan. Wanting to read it again is always a mark of a good piece.

I also like your style. Very clear, but it seems like it's a very well planned out piece.

Makes me want to read your other stuff smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


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Sneaky

smiley - applause

Good job! I love the little twists you put in your stories. Coming across gems like this makes my job mining a lot more enjoyable. Keep 'em comin'!

smiley - aliensmile


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