A Conversation for Tifton, Georgia, USA

Peer Review: A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 1

Midwestrocker

Entry: Tifton, Georgia, USA - A2517194
Author: Midwestrocker - U695236

This is my first review, but I still think it's pretty good. It's about my hometown.


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 2

frenchbean

Hello Midwestrocker smiley - smiley

Great start! smiley - applausesmiley - ok

Just one comment for starters smiley - winkeye You could think about adding some subheaders between sections. It would make it look better and attract more folk to read it.

I'll be back.... smiley - run

smiley - cheers
Fbsmiley - starsmiley - star


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 3

sprout

This is a good entry.

Written in a nice individual style, and humorous without being frivolous.

Any famous Tifton residents or historical events?

sprout


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 4

Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent)

Hi Midwestrocker,

Are you still around.

This entry is quite good!

I saw a few typos (it's instead of its, are instead of area).

I found the humour in some paces a little "strained". (Estimates for the number of hotels for example).

With very little work, I reckon it could become an edited guide entry.

Awu.


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 5

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Almost three months since the author visited us - a one day wonder.

Off to the Flea Market with it?


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 6

Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent)

HI GOsho,

I would say so. I'll second that.

Awu


A2517194 - Tifton, Georgia, USA

Post 7

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Was this one also going on an email somewhere, somewhen? smiley - whistle


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