A Conversation for King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Peer Review: A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 1

Twophlag Gargleblap - NWO NOW

Entry: King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo - A2504684
Author: Twophlag Gargleblap - NWO NOW - U109577

Part of my "mass-murderers of Europe" interest, Leopold killed more people than Hitler and Stalin combined, yet noone seems to bother remembering.


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 2

Researcher PSG

People tend to try and forget bad memories.

I have just given it a quick scan over and it seems ok, but I did find the lack of sections made it a bit tricky to read. You might want to think of try and see ways you can sectionalise it.

Researcher PSG


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 3

Mol - on the new tablet

Agree with PSG, also a couple of typos (should be tyranny and garrison)(haven't the energy for a detailed nitpick tonight but didn't spot much anyway). A map would be helpful although I've no idea if this is technically possible.

Where you refer to similar 20th century European excesses, you've put something like "from Hitler's holocaust to Stalin's collectivisation of the 1930s" (apologies for not having the exact text handy). For chronological reasons these two would be better swapped around; but you could extend the comparison to the Balkans in the 1990s, I think.

My knowledge of the political structure of Belgium in the early 20th century is not great - what was the relationship between Leopold and the government? Was it a constitutional monarchy?

Interesting (tho appalling) episode in history, good entry smiley - smiley

Mol


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 4

anhaga

Perhaps a mention of the Rwandan genocide ten years ago might be in order. The groundwork for the genocide was laid during the Belgian colonial period and Western (i.e. European) governments aided the genocide with their indifference. Leopold is not far from us today.


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 5

Researcher 177704

Good entry on an important subject smiley - smiley

I think that this would be greatly benefitted by GuideML. Subheaders (although some rejigging might be needed to make the text neatly fit into sections) and the tag for the long quotations would be useful.

It's a shame that this hasn't been that well noticed in PR, it has a great deal of potential.

smiley - rocket


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 6

sprout

Indeed.

I had heard that LĂ©opold's rule over Congo was considered barbaric even by the standards of the time. To the extent that there was some pressure from the European powers on him to cede control to the Belgian state.

If you want to bring the modern parallels in, you could note the 1950s implication of the Belgian gvmt and the CIA in the assasination of Patrick Lub... (darn it - can't remember how to spell his name any more - the first leader of the Congo post-independence)

sprout


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 7

anhaga

Patrice Lumbaba

smiley - smiley


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 8

Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562

Is this entry still being worked on? It would get into the Edited Guide quite easily, I think.


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 9

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

"Is this entry still being worked on?" -- I'm afraid it doesn't look like that smiley - erm. I got lost somewhere below para 10 (or was it 12?)

smiley - cheers
Bossel


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 10

GreyDesk

The author has been absent for two months now. I suggest we move this along to the Flea Market.


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 11

Researcher PSG

Seconded

Researcher PSG


A2504684 - King Leopold II and the Belgian Congo

Post 12

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

added to current email.


Key: Complain about this post