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Alternative Writing Workshop: A23013046 - Simon
Phoeniks Started conversation May 23, 2007
Entry: Simon - A23013046
Author: Phoeniks - U6128934
My poem. I think you can guess who it's for.
Phee 
A23013046 - Simon
minorvogonpoet Posted May 24, 2007
This conveys well the awkwardness of a first love. 
The rhythm varies a bit from one stanza to another. Do you read your poems aloud? It helps to show up bits which jar, which can then be changed.
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