h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Superb, great, fantastic collaboration: like Gilbert and Sullivan only this is better! Congrat.
This is a note from an Unknown visitor a customer in Kan-Guru's pouch restaurant. Say Hello to Jack and Jello for me. For the Love of the Earthy Humans! XY ( by courtesy of Gecko)

I'm superstitious. I always put the title on last.

I agree about: no title-- yet! I don't want the bunch of episods title anymore!
I took out my Journal entry totally, because I can not edit that.
I am going back to my computer where the text is stored.
I am going to make changes there incorporating your additions, and posted again, perhaps somewhere else, where further editing can be done on these pages. Suggestion???

In your editing I'd like to make just a few changes:


Regarding Jello entrance to the restaurant: " superlubrication" I'd like to take out.
"lizardous" also should not be there, because Jello is not a lizard in this story. By logic: Jack is a person, so is Jello.

The part you put in with the oversized people coming into the restaurant I understand, but it does not integrate into the entire story. I'd like to take that out.

To close the entire "essay" I would enclose a little poem to finish the story which would hold the piece together nicely in a unified fashion.
After:
"Jello paid her dues for her alienship and was greeted by a warm: Welcome back"

closing lines:

"So we reach the status quo,
From where we can further go,
Riding on the Milkey Way:
Where Holy Cows guard the way"

End.
_________________________

I am very well aware, that your busy time is coming, that is why I'd like to finish this work as soon as possible!
Thank you very much for your help and cooperation. Gecko

Changes? What happened to 'Superb, great, fantastic' and better than Gilbert and Sullivan?

Jello's a human and the large family has gone somewhere else for dinner. I invited them in order to break into Jello's speach which was a bit long at that point.

JTG

Dear JTG! Hope you will keep our friendship even though I have objection in the Editing you so kindly did.

I wish to post it with my words, the way I write.

I am leaving out some additinel text you added, because it goes way over the Editing process! I will keep the format to which you changed my original "playwrite" text,- but not very happy about this conventional way of presenting my thoughts! But I do that as you set it up.

Editing does not mean to me to change a great deal the whole concept!

As you know I am not spending time on GML. For me is a long process, have no time for that. It is nice, but I am just too busy with other things.

I much rather tell you that the birds arrived, and hope my cold will go away in a few days to enjoy to be outside more.

You are a very creative person, and so am I. But our creativity should be applyed inside our works, and don't go over the individual thoughts if they are sane and understandable.

I am submitting "A tell-tale story".....etc. somewhere or even in more places, just for the fun of it!

Hope to hear from you with no hard feelings!
I also hope, that I feel better soon from this cold I got. Gecko

Of course we're still friends.

I think we have different ideas about what you want with this essay.

JTG

It is all done! Dear JTG! You can find:
F74130?thread=393254 will lead you there.

I made a note when I posted the entry, that I wrote the stuff, but John-The-Gardener did " some" editing, because I trimmed it quite a bit! I had to, because I as a female(mammal) ( if you please) do not write as a man. Perhaps you are not aware how one can tell your words and thoughts of a man!!!

I had different idea about editing, and finally I just did post the
"A tell-tale story about the Earthy Humans and the Alien".--
It is in AWW with Copy Paste! Easy!!!
I think it is good,but I had it for now.
I don't like to spend much time on a subject. I want to do something else, because again I promised somebody to write an article about NYC!
Now I tell you it will not take much time, because it is mostly about my personal experinces and to tell my opinion, does not take much. ( You know it now!)

I will return to the " episodes" to write more, but now I really have to put this exhibition together.
It is too cold to work outside and I maneged to get a handsom cold with running nose and sore throath because of the incredible bad-behaved squirrels!

I do not forget to thank you for your efforts on this work, but in the future we would have to "nail" it down what exactly is editing involved.??? OK?

I don't know what you want to do with the Entry you started? It certainly is nice with GML, but I can not say I wrote it when the editing made so much changes in it!. Certainly I'd like to put your name to my Entry A2411380, because there is a great deal of "stuff" incorporated in it from you as an editor!

My birds are fantastic! Good night, and Good Day to you tomorrow! Gecko