A Conversation for The Great Earthquake 1755

RE: The Great Earthquake 1755

Post 1

amusedO


This is very interesting and very well written.

If I had a suggestion, I think it would be to take out the date from the title and produce it in the opening paragraph. For no real reason other than it makes for a little more curiosity from this reader’s pov, would make me want to go in and find out more straight away with the big question – when did it occur, a ‘hook’ to draw the reader in.


RE: The Great Earthquake 1755

Post 2

Watermusic

Hi amusedO
I'm still not used to these threads everywhere conversations! I replied in the Peer review thread
smiley - cheers
Watermusic


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