h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Mary Shelley - The Formative Years - A22189025
Author: Fizzymouse - Your amazing grACE!! - With someone else's busy schedule! - U1899683


This is part one of a never ending series about .... well, it's part one and it's been kicking about for a while just wondered what you think.

I like

The only thing that grates on me is this;

the story of the story of...

Other than that, nice start

Thank you Matt.

When I see it all laid out like that it doesn't seem to be half as much work as it actually was.

I've added some links - if anyone can spot any more I'd be happy to add them.

Hi Fizzy - looks good, with a few nitpicks:

I just didn't like the phrase 'story behind the story'.

childcare?

I'd put the link on the whole word.

...and with copious flattery...

Sounds a little odd - it's that galvanisation experts thing in the middle.

< it was in it's fourth edition> its

Is 'height' the right word? How about 'intensity'?

Icy

Thanks for the help Icy, I think that's them all fixed up now.

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Yay!!

A great set of Entries Fizzy. Well done

Well done, Fizzy!

Why thank you all for your help and support ...... can't say I'll be sorry to see the back of her.

Congratulations Fizzy, I heard at the London meet that this project was landed in your lap, so to speak. That just makes it all the more impressive how you've developed it. Give yourself a , and a self high five.

Thank you Radox, it was my idea so I deserved it landing on my lap.

I'm more intrigued that my name was mentioned at the meet.


I'm innocent I tell ya' innocent.

That's not what we decided