h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Skanky

Hi Opti, I've subbed Marlon Brando and he's here: A34644314 for your appraisal and approval.

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wondered what you were going to say about him after Ant and Dec.

I'll have a read over, but I'm unsure about having a very short sentence like that at the beginning before a header. It just doesn't look right.

for acting as sub-editor to my entry

I hope I didn't bog you down with too many changes to make.

Just one thing I personally noticed in:

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The word 'acting' appears to be repeated perhaps change the last one to 'making films'.

PS. noticed that the sub-editor of Nick Park appears to have elvised

You're welcome

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nothing I can't handle, Opti

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That's the intro. I put in another header to separate it from his early life.

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is that better?

Do you like/agree with what I added? (The Superman stuff)

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*waves to Opti*

Yes that's much better.

The superman stuff is for the added links. I like your entries.

My Nick Park entry is here A33553271 I looked at the sub-editors ps and they've not been on h2g2 for a while it seems.

waves back

OK I tweaked it a little more, adding a couple of comments about his method acting, which a friend suggested would help finish the article, I hope you don't mind


I'm glad you found the Superman entries interesting, and especially the Superman curse, which could equally apply to Mr Brando



Aha, thanks for the further info, the sub is Atlantic_Cable, who is still a sub-ed (you can see the recent entries listed on his PS) even though he doesn't post. We all have our different ways, it's my personal preference to contact authors to discuss things which crop up during subbing and by no means a rule.

No worries

for looking into what has happened to my Nick Park entry.

Best Wishes

opti

Hello again Opti, sorry to be a pain but on final read-through I wasn't happy with the family section, and I've rewritten it so the two family deaths weren't in a footnote. It's all harrowing stuff but important to mention in his story

If you'll just OK it I'll return it to Eds, thanks Opti

I think what happened between his children did not help matters. I know how parents stress over their children. So it makes sense for it to be out of a footnote.

I'm for you to return it to the Eds.

thanks Opti, button pressed, see you on the FP

Congratulations on getting your canopic entry front page

Thank you

Have you seen the photo? A34644314

Damn!

When u said I thought it would be the Wild One/Streetcar etc Brando

but no

u don't c it that way

It's an interesting photo but not of worth

How about something with a dirty sweater on?

On The Waterfront?

(i'm only at work so i can't reccommend)