h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Pond Life - an Introduction to a Microcosm - A21382788
Author: Matt (the Hoopy), Esq. - U168592

Part 1 of a three part project.

Originally saw PR here: F8127061?thread=4563190

Now it has come back to PR!

The next two parts are linked within the Entry, but will be submitted to PR separately, so please can any suggestions etc. be added to the relevant PR thread, rather than at the Entries.



(I'll be having my name removed if they are accepted into the EG, plus there may be images, or even film footage, contributed by the author at some point!)

Matt

Bravo Matt; well done for breathing fresh life into these entries.
for later reading

Thank you for bringing these back into PR


Hopefully, Syrphus will now understand what we were trying to tell him. It is perfect for the Guide!


lil x

Thanks guys

I'm just the editor of the work really, me and S have worked hard on these together, and he certainly does understand why his writing is a must for the Guide.

Excellent introduction

I only found a couple of very minor nitpicks:

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I would move the bracketed words so that it reads: <>

In the first paragraph of the Jellyfish section:
<> its --> it's

Thanks h5 - I've sorted those out now

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

Congratulations Matt!



Ms GB

Thanks

For the Sub-editor:

Please can we wait until the whole set of Pond Life Entries are recommended before they are sent back for EG inclusion, that way all the links can be done in one lot, rather than having to pester people in Editorial Feedback.

Yay!