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A20720873 - Motorway Overtaking for a Better Britain
Rudest Elf Posted Apr 9, 2007
Good ideas, well expressed, T.A.
A few typos & suggestions:
Intro 3rd line: [go-ahead]
2nd para 4th line: (from far more regular reminders)?
3rd para 1st line: (where politicians threaten to develop and expand systems)?
Anatomy of a Motorway 2nd para 2nd line: [lanes]
2nd para 3rd line: [lane]
2nd para line 4: ('at times' not needed)
3rd para 4th line: [next five seconds/two minutes/hour and a half?]
4th para 1st line: [lanes]
4th para 5th line: [to know how] or [The law of the land requires that new drivers know how]
4th para 6th line: [negotiating]
4th para last line: [willingly]
Fixing the Root Cause 1st line: Comma needed after 'motorways'
Footnote 3: I think you mean 'inside out' 
A20720873 - Motorway Overtaking for a Better Britain
The Apprentice Posted Apr 10, 2007
Thanks for that - mistakes handled and in some cases I've modified the sentences significantly.
The Apprentice
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Apr 10, 2007
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Rudest Elf Posted Apr 10, 2007
Well done, T.A.!
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