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Post 1

Harvey

This is Great! just the page I've been looking for. Had a bit of trouble finding it though, but this message will sort that out. Will be back with more constructive comments later.

- Harv


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Post 2

Harvey

All very good stuff so theres just a couple of points to make it better.

Nitpick: in the beer today section at the end it starts "there is a vast surrounding beer" I think theres a word missing after vast.

A bit more detail on beers around the world would be nice.

Thats it at the moment.

Good luck,
Harv


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Post 3

Harvey

Just a tiny point, I think the sentences in a brief history of beer could do with being lengthened.


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Post 4

Pastey

Sorry I didn't get around to this sooner Harvey, got tied up doing the other beer related pages, then the community newspaper, the Post, and what with one thing and another.
I think I may have already changed the missing word, or added it rather. I'd love to do about the beer styles all around the globe, what beers are available and all that, but considering that in England alone there are over 3000 beers being brewed at any one time, that's a hell of a listsmiley - smiley

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