A Conversation for Japan 1: Japanese History and Culture

Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A18557300 - Japan 1: History Religion Arts and Language

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bobstafford

Entry: Japan 1: History Religion Arts and Language - A18557300
Author: Bob Stafford (Keeper of The Treacle Shadow) - U3151547



Please review This is an entry found in the flea market it deserves a much better fate than that. Opti deserves a lot of credit for this.
I have split the entry into 3 this is part 1. I would be interested to get an opinion.
Bob...


A18557300 - Japan 1: History Religion Arts and Language

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Gnomon - time to move on

I think it needs an overview of the history: the whole of Japanese history condensed into about three paragraphs. As it is, the periods are two short, so you can't tell which is significant.


A18557300 - Japan 1: History Religion Arts and Language

Post 3

bobstafford

Is this any better Gnomonsmiley - smiley


A18557300 - Japan 1: History Religion Arts and Language

Post 4

bobstafford

Is this about finished now? smiley - biggrin


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