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A13943261 - Ceres- Dwarf Planet

Post 21

shagbark

Article Ceres Dwarf Planet A13943261
author=shagbark
I'm happy with it as it is. I do not envision any more major changes.


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Post 22

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Yes, it seems structurally sound. smiley - ok

>>This process was aparently<<
*apparently*

smiley - cheers


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Post 23

shagbark

Note the recommended article on Dwarf Planets Linked to A13943261
When this article goes into the EG it will have another number and that link will have to be changed. Any bets on whether this will be picked before that article hits the front page smiley - huh


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Post 24

shagbark

smiley - zen


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Post 25

AlexAshman


A lot of proof-reading to be done still - there's a lot of stuff you can fix - for instance:

You're missing some colons off the end of "Equatorial Radius (km)"

The Early History header needs to look like the version I just typed, as opposed to being in caps.

The "double quotes" need to become 'single ones'

You're lacking spaces in "the goddess of agriculture,grain,and maternal love", and you need more spaces and no commas in "December,2003-January,2004"

The second footnote should be made to link from McFadden's name as opposed to being in a footnote. The other footnote need full stops at the end, and you should put a comma after "Sotin" to make it "McCord and Sotin, 2005."

"Using an ion engine this craft would reach Vesta in 2010 spend a few month there then break orbit and go to Ceres establishing an orbit there in 2016."
-->
"Using an ion engine, this craft would reach Vesta in 2010, spend a few months there, then break orbit and go to Ceres, establishing an orbit there in 2016."

Alex smiley - smiley


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Post 26

shagbark

I'll get right on it smiley - smiley


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Post 27

shagbark

Done smiley - smiley


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Post 28

shagbark

any more comment? smiley - zen


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Post 29

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

Only that i've had this conversation on my list for about 2 weeks and haven't posted anything yetsmiley - blush
i like the entry smiley - ok
can't find anythin to comment on thoughsmiley - erm

SPsmiley - winkeye


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Post 30

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Shagbark are you happy with your Entry as it stands?

GBsmiley - towel
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Post 31

shagbark

I'm happy with it smiley - smiley


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Post 32

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ok


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Post 34

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Congratulations! smiley - applause

smiley - cheers


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Post 35

AlexAshman


smiley - applausesmiley - bubblysmiley - alesmiley - cakesmiley - teasmiley - choc


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - bubblygreat stuff shagbarksmiley - applause

smiley - moonsmiley - marssmiley - starsmiley - crescentmoonsmiley - planetsmiley - fullmoonsmiley - rocketsmiley - earth


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steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

well done
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smiley - bubbly
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Post 38

aka Bel - A87832164

Congratulations shagbark smiley - moonsmiley - spacesmiley - planetsmiley - spacesmiley - earthsmiley - spacesmiley - bubbly


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Post 39

Sea Change

Coolness! smiley - cool


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Post 40

shagbark

Go Dwarf Planet


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