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sibansu Started conversation Jul 7, 2006
Entry: Who Says, thus undecided - A12981279
Author: sibansu - U4757273
This paper is mainly based on the 'so-called' contradiction between holism and atomism as well as individualism. I stand on an aporia.
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Not him Posted Jul 7, 2006
You'd better explain your terminology: I don't understand 'praxis', propinquity, 'VIBGIOR' etc.
Could you check that all of your sentences make sense, please. It'd make this a lot easier to understand.
and have you read the Writing-Guidelines?
among other things you should be attempting to write for the general public to understand.
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Smij - Formerly Jimster Posted Jul 7, 2006
Plus, and this might be a bit of a surprise... it's not a paper. 
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 7, 2006
Hi Sibansu! This is going to require a lot of work before it is publishable. You may understand what you are saying, but I doubt anybody else does.
I suggest you start by assuming you are explaining this to your granny. Make it simple. Or at least start simple; as you introduce and explain concepts, you can start to use them in your argument. With some work, you'll end up with something which is readable and convincing.
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Mu Beta Posted Jul 7, 2006
I stood on an aporia once. Took ages to get the bits of glass out of my foot.
B
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Jul 8, 2006
This does not sit pretty on the eyes and looks like long lists to me. Please make things more manageable for me to read.
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Spiff Posted Jul 14, 2006
Although it has been said that I sit on a poor rear, I've no idea what this was all about.
If your poetry is anything to go by, English is not actually your first language... but then, nor was Wittgenstein's, and everyone seems to like his stuff...
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 15, 2006
I don't like Wittgenstein, as it happens.
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 20, 2006
Totally unsuited to PR. Propose MBTE:, seconder?
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Jul 20, 2006
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Peer Review: A12981279 - Who Says, thus undecided
- 1: sibansu (Jul 7, 2006)
- 2: Not him (Jul 7, 2006)
- 3: Smij - Formerly Jimster (Jul 7, 2006)
- 4: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 7, 2006)
- 5: Mu Beta (Jul 7, 2006)
- 6: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Jul 8, 2006)
- 7: Spiff (Jul 14, 2006)
- 8: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 15, 2006)
- 9: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 20, 2006)
- 10: Mu Beta (Jul 20, 2006)
- 11: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Jul 20, 2006)
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