h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Cotswold chine - A11999037
Author: Da'rey Re'fi - U1780114 - U1780114

Cotswold Chine Home-School
Cotswold chine is a boarding school in Nailsworth Gloustershire. it is for ages 9 - 18. this is a school for those with special needs, such as learning diorders and ADHD. This school is a School and a Care home, so it has accomodation for the students and a varied activity timetable for every young person.

Hello Da'rey,

Are you going to tell us more about the history of your school?

We would need a little bit more information for this to become an Edited Entry for the Guide.

Here in Peer Review, we try to assist you in pulling your factual item together and help with spelling, grammar and such things;

ie: accom(m)odation = has two m's


lil xx

oops sorry brb

Sorry.. you also missed the 's' out of di(s)order..


lil x

take 2

now?

You still have lots more you need to add to get this far enough to be reviewed properly.

You have started on the history of the building, which is very good.

When did it become a school?

How long has it been a school for those with special needs?

Or even whether it has always been a boarding school?


You have touched on the fact that lessons are worked around the individual pupil, there might be more you could add there.

It will take a long time to bring your article to the standards of the EG, are you willing to work with us on it? I will try to help you as best I can.


lil xx

i don't know anything else about the school! is there any other way it can be published?

If you wish to leave it like this, you can have it moved from PR and left in your Personal Space.

Have a look at other works in PR and some in the Edited Guide, this will give you an idea of what is needed. I am willing to work with you further, but is has to be you own work for you to get the credit for it.

lil xx

ok how can you help?

I'm not entirely certain yet, it depends on what information I can find out from the web.. and what you can do with the information if and when I give it go you..

Will you be patient and willing to work with me on this?

lil xx

yes definately

Firstly, I want you to remove this from PR just now. There is too much to do on it for it to remain here.

Click on this: http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/RF1

and scroll down the page and you will find you entry with an X beside it, just click on that X and you will be returned to your Personal Space.

We will do our work in there for now..

ok i have done, where do we talk about this guide entry?

We can continue talking here..

Now, a friend of mine has found something about your school on the web, you can try asking your teachers or headmaster for more information too.

Firstly, you must not copy anything you see, you have to write it in your own words, or it will not be allowed into the Guide ?

i won't

Sorry.. that should have been ??

My friend and I are just sorting out something .. won't be long..

Hiya! I am Terri, the friend that Lil mentioned. I found this website about your school, you can just click on it to see what it says:

http://www.isbi.com/isbi-viewschool/175-COTSWOLD_CHINE_HOME_SCHOOL.html

it looks like a lovely place!!! How long have you been there, 'cos i see the school takes students from age 9 to 18, a wide age range.

Are you one of the lucky ones with a computer in your room? It's good that you get to use internet, also good that your school is careful to ensure you don't get into any danger doing so. A good place to meet other Young Researchers on here is A983171

I live in France, so if you are doing French, do let me know, my French isn't brilliant but i can probably tell you quite a lot about what it's like living here.

Do feel free to come & visit my Personal Space, it's not quite A4 pages long!

If you need any help with the writing stuff, do ask me. i am one of those weird people who can spell really well...but i can't do number stuff to save my life, can't even remember my own phone number! We are all wired differently i suppose!

Anyway, have fun on hootoo & if it's all a bit weird at first!

Terri (zdt when feeling lazy, which is much of the time!)