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Writing Workshop: A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 1

J

Entry: Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana - A1158419
Author: Jodan - Mining 42 - Vote for my new signature! See Journal for details - U201497

A flea market rescue, but it needs a bit of work before it's PR ready smiley - smiley

Suggestions?

smiley - blacksheep


A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 2

Z

Does it? I'm not so sure, there is nothing I would critise at all in this entry. Other than the fact that I want to go. And really refering to the girls in the tribe as easy, even in ledgend is not very PC methinks.


A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 3

J

Yeah, me thought so too. smiley - smiley


A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 4

Z

it's odd but I would find it perfectly acceptable to say that "girls from Liverpool have a reputation as being easy" because firstly, I'm from Liverpool, and have spent my sixth form years provign that fact. And secondly I'm not stated that is a good reason to go to Liverpool, this seems to suggest that the fact the girls are easy is a good reason to make friends with them.


A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 5

J

I took the section out, anyway. It doesn't really contribute to the entry, being only 'legend'.

I'll give this a bit of work and I'll probably put it in PR next week smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


A1158419 - Navrongo, Kassena-Nankani District, Ghana

Post 6

U168592

oi. PR next week? pfft. smiley - tongueout


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