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Peer Review: A1139834 - Tourist Sites in Lanzarote

Post 1

Elentari

Entry: Tourist Sites in Lanzarote - A1139834
Author: Elentari - U202814

Having visited Lanzarote only a few weeks ago, and visited virtually all of the places I've discussed here, I think I've done them justice - I hope so anyway! Please tell me what you think, though.


A1139834 - Tourist Sites in Lanzarote

Post 2

Elentari

Anyone?


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Post 3

J

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A couple of issues I have with the headers. I think you can lose the first header and perhaps make an ordered list out of the last three headers. smiley - ok

Looks like a good solid entry though smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 4

Elentari

Thanks. I've got rid of the first header like you suggested and incorporated the final three (I know its not quite what you suggested)into one called "other Places of Interest" with "Beaches", "Marinas", "Watersports" and "Nightlife" all listed seperately in bold, but I can't help but feel like it's not quite right.

Any thoughts?


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Post 6

J

smiley - bubbly


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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Congrats, it looks great! And don't worry, the sub-editor will be able to make sure the headers and subheaders are done in the "Edited Guide Style". smiley - biggrin

-- Mikey


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Post 8

Elentari

That's great! I was expecting another comment, not that! Thanks guys!


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Lou, (Listy) Not around too much, don't be offended if I don't reply.. I'LL TRY!

Afternoon, I am that said friendly subed!

Ive never been to Lanzarote so this should be interesting...

Any changes I make I'll update you on!

Lou


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Lou, (Listy) Not around too much, don't be offended if I don't reply.. I'LL TRY!

Afternoon, I am that said friendly subed!

Ive never been to Lanzarote so this should be interesting...

Any changes I make I'll update you on!

Lou


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Post 11

Elentari

Thanks. smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Lou, (Listy) Not around too much, don't be offended if I don't reply.. I'LL TRY!

It's all done I *think* smiley - biggrin

V interesting entry

It's now here... A1149275

Only a few changes really, nothing major, really just tidying up the GuideML (capitalising it) and a few SPAG mistakes...smiley - smiley

If theres anything you want changing, please tell me - I'll wait until I get confirmation from you to send it back to the authors smiley - ok

Thanks

Lou


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Post 13

Elentari

It looks fine, thanks. Feel free to send it off. Is SPAG spelling and grammar?


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Lou, (Listy) Not around too much, don't be offended if I don't reply.. I'LL TRY!

Yeah
smiley - sorry

I always do that... use dodgy abbreviations, sorry!

Thanks smiley - ok

Lou - look out for it on the front page soon smiley - biggrin


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Post 15

Elentari

Excellent, thanks.


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