h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Steps Beach of Rincon, Puerto Rico - A11398115
Author: coronacolada - U3886140

As I continue venturing to Puerto Rico, I plan on cataloguing many of the beaches. This being the one I spent the most time at on my last trip, however, this is the one that is currently my favorite.

-tom

sic luceat lux

Hello, Tom,
What a wonderful place the Steps Beach sounds! You describe it very well. In terms of the entry, I wonder if you would consider putting in some headings to break up the text and guide your reader throught the adventure. You have afew sentences that could do with a tweak but before we get to that, I would like to ask if you could insert a short paragraph (perhaps have it at your second section) where you describe the beach, its dimensions and its location so it is easier to imagine it as you are talking about it later.
I really like this. I hope you come back and work on it a little more. Let's hope someone wh has been can come and comment as well.

Wilma

Wilma -
Thanks for the input. I will do what I can. I did a google search and found little about the beach to my disappointment, as far as technicalities are concerned. I'll gather some more info.

Thanks!

-tom

sic luceat lux

Hi Tom,
How are you doing with your entry?

Wilma

Nominate Flea Market.

Seconded