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Anushodhak Started conversation Jul 22, 2003
Entry: Kabaddi the Game - A1117757
Author: Anushodhak - U233924
Hi there,
I seek your suggestion/ comments on this entry. Well most of the content is from internet but this is an honest effort to present it in an easy to understand form.
Regards
Anushodhak
A1117757 - Kabaddi the Game
J Posted Jul 22, 2003
If you're planning on submitting this to PR, I have a suggestion.
Take out all of the first person references and make sure it follows the letter of the law- the Writing-Guidelines and then it would look fine! It's basically just confined to the first paragraph, so it wouldn't be hard to fix.
I like the entry too. Well done
A1117757 - Kabaddi the Game
Anushodhak Posted Jul 22, 2003
Hi Jodan,
Thanks for appreciating my entry! Submitting it to peer review forum after making desired corrections!
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