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Post 1

I Love Queen

Entry: The Rhyming Poem - A1092665
Author: I Love Queen - U232647

It is a very strange poem, but a very interesting poem. Tell me what you think.


A1092665 - The Rhyming Poem

Post 2

a girl called Ben

I like this, and the more I think about it, the more I like it. It has a kind of sinister whimsy which creeps up on you. I am tempted to ask what kind of drugs you take, so I can avoid them!

Thanks for posting it here.

Ben


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Post 3

J

What an interesting read. I'm not quite sure I understand it completely so I'll reread it a few times and then give a better comment. smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 4

J

I can't think what I was doing when I couldn't reread it and come back smiley - smiley

I get the Dr Who reference now, after having read up on him by the way.

And I stand by my original comments

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 5

nadia

Cute little oddity but it doesn't scan terribly well.

Suggesting a move.
N


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Post 6

Spynxxx

Agreed and seconded


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