A Conversation for another poem

Alternative Writing Workshop: A1066998 - another poem

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World Service Memoryshare team

Entry: another poem - A1066998
Author: Normal - U229204

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A1066998 - another poem

Post 2

a girl called Ben

I like this even better than the other one, Normal. (Do come back, and see that people are reading your poems, and enjoying them!)

One of the things that fascinates me about writing poetry is that there is often more in the poem than you realise when you write it. I read this one as a humourous piece, but then I stopped to wonder whether that was your intention. Was it?

Anyway. Thanks for posting it, and if you decide to post more do put them here in <./>RF5</.> the Alternative Writing Workshop. I always comment on poems I see, and so do other researchers.

Ben


A1066998 - another poem

Post 3

nadia

Hmm, I think the rhymes make for the comedy effect though I didn't get the feeling that it was intended to be comic, more ironic, or maybe there to hide a sing. Not sure if the previous poem is colouring my reading though. I certainly found 'and no sound' sinister.

Thanks again, Normal wherever you be,
Speckly.


A1066998 - another poem

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CAC Continuum

Using this for the CAC Continuum.

Speckly


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