h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hey Lisa...

First off, be careful. It's spelled Aurora, and one of the words you want is luxury, as well... please go over your spelling and grammar. Please divide up your great descriptions and ideas into sentences.

I find it really hard to get very far in reading this page. As writers and creators, we need to know-- and respect-- the rules of written English.

Aside from the technicalities, it's a beautiful effort.

Don't know that I like the isolationist approach of making it a female only coffee house. If that's really your vision for it, then you certainly don't have to change it. I just don't feel that a place which is exclusive belongs in the Musehome...

If you'd like to improve the quality of the Aurora and have it in the Musehome, then I feel that if you keep just one part of the coffeehouse for females only, then that has the potential for fun, and I suspect that something like that might arouse some interest in researchers.

All up to you. Thanks!!!