h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: S.U.N.C.T.S. - A1048961
Author: Vicki Virago. Can you smoke nicotine patches? - U205101

As far as I can see, this is finished although comments if needed will be heeded.

This looks good to me - a little bit brief, though. Is there no more medical background or advice for sufferers you can put in?

You've spelt SUNCTS wrong in the fourth paragraph - I'd correct that if I were you.

While you're at it, take the dots out of the abbreviation in the title - the EG tends to be anti-dots.

A link to A882876 would be a good idea.

Otherwise, this is fine.

B

Thanks Master B. It's not until someone else looks at it that you see where you went wrong.

I'm going to get my uncle to look at it. He has SUNCTS so knows exactly what's going on.

In the meantime, should I take it out of Peer Review?

Only if you think your uncle is likely to suggest major editorial changes or a complete re-write.

If you're only going to be adding bits and pieces, it's fine to keep it in PR. Just post a note in this thread to the Scouts/Italics asking them not to pick it until you're done.

B

OK....all finished!! I am unaware of anything else I need to add to this. As far as I can see, it is finished, but please comment further if anything needs altering.

Vicki

I don't know why I was listed as a contributor. I've removed my name from it.

I think the title should be "SUNCTS Headaches". It is too cryptic as it stands. Other than that, the entry is good!

You were listed as a contributor because of the link with Migraines....you were a contributor in that, so I thought it only fair.

I've noted your comment on the heading and will change it right now

If you link to another entry, you shouldn't list the authors of that entry as contributors to your entry. Ideally, your entry should link to as many existing Edited Entries as possible.

But thanks, anyway!

Off to delete names then!

I've also noted what you said about links and in future entries will try to add more.......

I notice you now call it 'SUNCTS Migraines'. Is that correct? They don't sound like migraines at all to me. They sound like a different sort of headache.

Between headaches and migraines - they are more like migraines, but I suppose it could be classed more as a headache than a migraine as a migraine has a clasification of it's own......should I change it?

I think so.

Done

I think I just sit here and wait for a few weeks/months now don't I.....

It's a good entry, so I'm sure someone will pick it eventually. Since it's been in Peer Review for more than a week, it could even be picked today!

Hi Vicki

This looks great - have patience!

I see that Gnomon brought the issue of the credit to those involved with the Migraine entry: but this SUNCTS entry is still listed on my page - although my name's not on it - I wonder why? I don't think it's your prob - but something that will get picked up as it goes through the system...

Looking forward to seeing it in the EG

Thanks Cloviscat

I don't know why it's still showing up in your PS.........a glitch I suppose.

doesn't worry me though!

Hi Vicki - if you've still got some time on your hands, there is some work you can do with the GuideML of this entry, which will make some Sub-editor's life a whole lot easier.

Instead of using the tag all the time, try using .... tags around your paragraphs. They will automatically space out your text. Similarly with the list. If you use a list tag, as follows:


Item one on the list
Item two on the list
etc.


This is also a whole lot easier than numbering them yourself and using line-breaks.

Lastly, you've spelt 'obviously' as 'obvriously'

B

Hiya B

Took on board your suggestions and followed them through.....



.....thanks for the help hun







Don't tell Odo I did that!!!!

Hmmm...I dunno; I think a little bit of jealousy would do her good.

B