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Entry: The La's - The Band And their Album - A10306522
Author: Jackalopides - U3539214

I wrote this article a few years ago, and forgot about it, but it never got peer reviewed. Is there any chance it could be listed under 'Musical Works'?

Hi Jackalopides

This seems to be a very informative entry on the La's. I think however it would be much easier to read if there were a few subheadings added, and if possible some of the paragraphs divided into smaller ones. White space and subheadings tend to make things easier to read online.

Also I would suggest adding links to relevant external websites and some other H2G2 entries.

With a bit of spit and polish this could be a great entry, and I hope you feel inspired to write more very soon.

Hi mintandteatree, unless you can still access your original account in which you wrote this then you won't be able to do any amendments or edits. You'll either need to log in as the original author or you'll need to copy this into a new article in your new name and remove this one from PR.
There's no point in anyone commenting till editing rights have been established.


BMT Scout

Oh well spotted BMT - I'd not noticed the discrepancy there.

thanks for pointing it out.

Mintandteatree hasn't posted anywhere since putting this back in PR.
I'd recommend either a return to entry or Flea Market as it has potential for the EG.


BMT Scout

yes, there is no point in it being here as no one can edit it

Agreed