A Conversation for The Greek Myth of Heracles

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Nice, comprehensive article marred by "Zeus,who went to Alcmene in disguise" not having a main verb. Take out "who" and read both versions aloud and you'll see what I mean. smiley - starsmiley - star


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Sam

I see what you mean! And I've removed the offending 'who'. Thanks for pointing this out. smiley - smiley


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The Dali Llama

time


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Thanks smiley - starsmiley - star


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