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Niggles for the editors

Post 1

Wand'rin star

This excellent introduction needs a couple of minor corrections before you archive it
1)'stopped to rise exponentially' should be 'stopped rising exponentially'
2)Diseases that are called after people conventionally put a possessive apostrope +s after the name. Thus - 'Karposi's sarcoma' and 'non-Hodgkin's lymphoma'.
There should be a paragraph break before "Aids is caused..." as a new subject is being introduced. smiley - star

Niggles for the editors

Post 2

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Fixed - ta!


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