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Post 1

Robert

Hey Woodpigeon,

I guess you know the score already (what with the 5 digit user number and all), so I'm not going to pour out the Subeditors rhetoric to you (needless to say, you can check up on it at <./>Subeditors-What</.&gtsmiley - winkeye. If you have any comments, or questions about what I've done, please post them here.

Thanks smiley - bubbly,
Robert


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Post 2

Robert

Hey,

I've looked through the entry and made a few minor changes. I'm waiting on answers to a few style tips from the Subeditors Mailing List, I'll give you details within the next few days.


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Post 3

Robert

I've checked the Help Pages a few hundred times more and found the answers to what I was asking, so that's another thing sorted.

Now, I'm going to do some 'Link Propogation' (adding links to other articles in relevent places) and another read-through (out loud for maximum crazy factor).

Only a few more steps to go!

Robert


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Post 4

Robert

I've finished adding links - only one extra one I could find - so one more quick read through before it goes back.


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Post 5

Robert

...which I've just done.

If you haven't got any questions, I'll submit the entry on Thursday (assuming the h2g2 servers don't break during the downtime!).

Robert


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Post 6

Woodpigeon

Hi Robert,

Cool! Thanks! There is just one small change I would like to make -

"There are three major superclusters in the locality of the solar system: The Hyades, The Pleiades, and very close to us, The Sirius Supercluster" - "the locality" sounds as if it is in the sun's back yard - (which it is, if you don't care too much about distances). It would be better to say "within 1000 light years of the solar system", I think.

Cheers,

smiley - peacedoveWoodpigeon


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Post 7

Woodpigeon

Actually Robert, you will get away with 500 light years. It sounds a bit better.


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Post 8

Robert

Done smiley - smiley.

Anything else?


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Post 9

Woodpigeon

Nope - looks good to me!


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Post 10

Robert

Good. Sending entry now. Please standby to be ejected into the large pile of Pending entries...

(and it is large!)

Robert


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Post 11

Woodpigeon

Suspended Animation Protocol activated....


Tell me when it's time to wake up!

Thanks Robert,

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smiley - peacedoveWoodpigeon


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