A Conversation for Giant Expedition Bicycle 2002 Model
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The Fish Started conversation May 24, 2002
Hello Dorian... 
It seems my article has been recommended without my knowing... all very confusing... 
Let me know if you have any questions... 
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The Fish Posted May 25, 2002
Just to make your life easier;
Already found a few mistakes I missed earlier...
In the sentence:
"This causes energy loss though the absorption of the energy..." - It should read:
"This causes energy loss through the absorption of the energy..."
Also in one of my last paragraphs;
"That way, your garenteed to get lost!"
Should read;
"That way, you're guaranteed to get lost!"
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The Fish Posted May 26, 2002
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I just uploaded some pictures of it ..... dunno what the score on placing them within an entry is, but nevermind ei...
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo01.jpg
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo01sm.jpg
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo02.jpg
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo02sm.jpg
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo03sm.jpg
http://www.fishyland.co.uk/h2g2/giantexpo04sm.jpg
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Dorian Gray Posted Jul 23, 2002
Sorry it has taken me so long to do this, neglect and other reasons, the pictures work fine, I changed some sentence structure here and their but your meaning is still the same. A few of the jokes needed to be reworded to make them make sense.
Dorian
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