A Conversation for Epilepsy
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Started conversation Jan 4, 2002
Just thought I'd look over what's being done... Don't mind me...
Found some things...(If they're due to differences between British and American english, disregard...)
For many, the word 'epilepsy', calls...
Shouldn't be a comma after 'epilepsy'
...immediately to the hospital...
I've noticed that my friends in the UK would say immediately to hospital, not to *the* hospital
...only four to six%...
Shouldn't % be spelled out here? Or did I do it in the original?
I'm amazed--Hardly any changes! I think the only ones are the dropping of the square brackets around inserts into quotes, and a rewording of the opening sentence to eliminate the dashes...
*leaves mufflewhumps for the editors*
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World Service Memoryshare team Posted Jan 7, 2002
Hi Amy, Anna here,
Thanks for pointing out those corrections - all done now.
I've just read your personal space - you and your husband Tom have exactly the same wedding anniversary as me and my other half, Paul. Same year and everything
Cheers for the mufflewhumps, too.
Anna
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Jan 7, 2002
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Jan 8, 2002
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Jan 8, 2002
Just looked at it again... Again, if this is a difference between British and American english, never mind...
...only four to six per cent...
I thought it was percent, not per cent
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World Service Memoryshare team Posted Jan 9, 2002
Hi Amy,
I think you're right, again there's a difference between American and British English - in the OED there's definitely a gap!
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Jan 9, 2002
OK then! Um, I don't remember exactly (it's not quite 6 am here, and I'm getting dressed for work between posts (sad, huh?) so I don't have time to look again right now) but I think that perhaps I have 'percent' in there once or twice...
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Jan 9, 2002
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Menthol Penguin - Currently revising/editing my book Posted Aug 16, 2007
Hope you don't mind me posting here but at the top you spelt Hippocrates with an 'r however a few lines further down it wasn't spelt with an 'r'.
Which one's right?
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Aug 16, 2007
The one with the r.
*nudges editor, since she can't fix it herself*
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Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) Posted Aug 16, 2007
Oh, and I'm impressed--it's been like that for over 5.5 years, and no one's noticed (or at least, no one's said anything...)!
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Menthol Penguin - Currently revising/editing my book Posted Aug 17, 2007
I always pick up little mistakes like that, but never when they're in my work! It's so annoying.
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- 1: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 4, 2002)
- 2: World Service Memoryshare team (Jan 7, 2002)
- 3: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 7, 2002)
- 4: World Service Memoryshare team (Jan 8, 2002)
- 5: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 8, 2002)
- 6: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 8, 2002)
- 7: World Service Memoryshare team (Jan 9, 2002)
- 8: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 9, 2002)
- 9: World Service Memoryshare team (Jan 9, 2002)
- 10: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Jan 9, 2002)
- 11: Menthol Penguin - Currently revising/editing my book (Aug 16, 2007)
- 12: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Aug 16, 2007)
- 13: Amy Pawloski, aka 'paper lady'--'Mufflewhump'?!? click here to find out... (ACE) (Aug 16, 2007)
- 14: Menthol Penguin - Currently revising/editing my book (Aug 17, 2007)
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