A Conversation for Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Update Forum: A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Started conversation Mar 19, 2007
Entry: UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA - A20921924
Author: Jimi X - U53353
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
It is with a heavy heart that I submit this entry to the Update Forum. I held off for a year in the vain hope that cooler heads would prevail and save my beloved course from the 'dozers. Sadly it was not to be...
- Jimi X
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Mar 20, 2007
Should the descriptions of the holes be changed to past tense? The "Good Luck" looks particularly out of place.
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Posted Mar 20, 2007
Yes, you're right.
Each tense change breaks my heart.
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Posted Mar 20, 2007
Done. 
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Mar 20, 2007
The "Related BBCi Link" section is no longer done, and we would remove it, but this entry would end very suddenly in that case. Can you provide a final concluding paragraph?
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Mina Posted Mar 22, 2007
I'd have to argue that a golf course is paradise, all that grass is not a good thing for the planet. 
The only query I'd have for the entry, is that is it worth having an entry on something that's not there any more? Unless it's something spectacular that needs to be remembered?
Sorry to hear you've lost your fav place though.
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Skankyrich [?] Posted Apr 25, 2007
Removing the centring tag from the top blockquote is my only suggestion - looks good to go, then 
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Posted Jun 8, 2007
Changes made and suggestions incorporated...
Thanks for your help and patience!
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jun 18, 2007
Is this ready to go, then?
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Posted Jun 18, 2007
I'm ready if you lot are...
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 13, 2007
This is intended as an update of A2622674.
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 13, 2007
Do you want a Front Page promo for this, Jimi?
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 13, 2007
OK, I've requested one anyway.
The Entry has been updated, and I've set in motion the steps for getting it acknowledged on the Front Page.
A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
Jimi X Posted Jul 14, 2007
Thanks. Either way was fine with me...
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Update Forum: A20921924 - UPDATE - Parkview Golf Course, Hershey, Pennsylvania, USA
- 1: Jimi X (Mar 19, 2007)
- 2: Gnomon - time to move on (Mar 20, 2007)
- 3: Jimi X (Mar 20, 2007)
- 4: Jimi X (Mar 20, 2007)
- 5: Gnomon - time to move on (Mar 20, 2007)
- 6: Mina (Mar 22, 2007)
- 7: U168592 (Apr 25, 2007)
- 8: Skankyrich [?] (Apr 25, 2007)
- 9: Jimi X (Jun 8, 2007)
- 10: Gnomon - time to move on (Jun 18, 2007)
- 11: Jimi X (Jun 18, 2007)
- 12: U168592 (Jul 13, 2007)
- 13: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 13, 2007)
- 14: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 13, 2007)
- 15: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 13, 2007)
- 16: Jimi X (Jul 14, 2007)
- 17: h2g2 auto-messages (Aug 7, 2007)
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