h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Thanks for undertaking this subbing. I have made most of the stylistic changes suggested. This is my first guide entry and I have a lot to learn. Please help me make it better.

Hello, I'm Galaxy Babe, your sub-editor. This is a very interesting tale and I'm delighted to polish it up for you (not that it needs much!)

I've found a direct link to the portrait and substituted that instead of using the same link twice.

What a fascinating story, thanks for writing it

I'm amazed it's your first Entry, I hope it's the first of manyit's *so* much better than my first efforts!

I'll let you know when I'm done subbing because I'd like you to approve any changes I make before I return it to the Editors to join the queue for the Front Page. After I relinquish it, you can watch its progress on the ComingUp page

Do you have any questions?

Galaxy Babe

OK I am done subbing, I've had to rewrite a few things due to similaries with the webpage you link to.

If you're in agreement with the finished version, I'll return it to the Editors.

I would like to return this, because I can't get any more entries to sub until I return the ones I have. If I don't here from you, I'll return it tomorrow.

Sorry for the delay Galaxy Babe. I've been moving and have finally arrived at my new home.

That's OK, but I've had to return the article today. I hope it meets with your satisfaction If there's anything you disagree with, this can be liaised at Editorial Feedback with a Curator, as soon as it's gone live.

All the bestsee you on the Front Page!

GB

Thanks GB, I am sure you have improved it. I certainly won't be in such a panic when I write another one. Unfortunately RL isn't being very generous in giving me any free time currently.

You're welcome
It's what I signed up to do, we subs polish the rough diamonds and make them sparkle

I know that feeling!Never enough hours in the day!!

with your next Entry and remember:

Thanks for the good job! I didn't expect it to be so fast!

Well done
It's because there isn't very many entries in the "polished" queue
I've just ordered four more to sub

I hope they are interesting to you, do you get to pick or are you assigned to them? Just curious.