A Conversation for British Burial Barrows: Pond and Saucer Barrows
Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A18021197 - The h2g2 University Part 5 Pond and Saucer Barrows
bobstafford Started conversation Dec 9, 2006
Entry: The h2g2 University Part 5 Pond and Saucer Barrows - A18021197
Author: Bob Stafford (Keeper of The Treacle Shadow) - U3151547
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A18021197 - The h2g2 University Part 5 Pond and Saucer Barrows
Fizzymouse- no place like home Posted Dec 12, 2006
Thanks for the invite Bob, I'm not much good at typos and stuff, but I gave it a go just for you.
limited number of...
either too many have/hads or an unneccessary normally I think.
I know what you mean here, but it isn't very clear, perhaps a reworking of it?
Found in Wiltshire, Hampshire and Dorset,
I'd try >To date around 65 pond barrows have been identified< Your choice of course.
This is another little bit that I know what you mean, but it could be rephrased.
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I enjoyed this, it sort of took me back to school, I seem to recall we 'did' this subject quite heavily in history class. and
A18021197 - The h2g2 University Part 5 Pond and Saucer Barrows
bobstafford Posted Dec 12, 2006
Thanks fizzy I have taken care of all your alterations, Some are objective and need you to comment as to the improvement (or lack ok it). Thanks for the interest.
hear from you soon
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