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Entry: How I Met Your Mother - TV Show - A87835936
Author: the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish - U204330

Warning, contains spoilers

Looks good to me! Not a TV show I've watched, so I can't comment on the content. Only microscopically minor thing I was wondering about on the first read-through was the sentence 'it took them on may college road trips.' Should that be 'many' college road trips, or May college road trips (trips taking place in May)?

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This is excellent

I have seen all the episodes, but only in the order that E4 decided to show them to me - this Entry contained details that I hadn't picked up on, so I learned something too.

I notice Marshall is also spelled Marshal sometimes - which is right? Also Rangit - I thought his name would be spelled Ranjit, but I'm not sure.

Is Lyndsy Fonseca related to someone in the production team? Whenever I saw the credits I thought the surname was familiar...

The second paragraph in The End section looks like it belongs in the paragraph about Barney in the Main Cast section.

Lyndsy Fonseca played Kick Ass's girlfriend in the films ... will look into any relations

you're correct on spellings, will look at changing them

GAHHHHHHHH ! just added in all the IMDB links .... and h2g2 ate the page

(goes off to kick a hamster)

(Take that, you hamster!}
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it was getting to the point when everytime I changed the guideml, the system added in another dozen errors, so I've given up with this version of the entry ... new one is here ... A87836089 http://h2g2.com/review_forum/A395589/conversation/view/F48874/T8310070

Can you remove this one from Peer Review to avoid confusion?
I can if you'd prefer.

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could you please

I have no idea where new 'remove from PR button' link is?

Okay, I'll do that now.

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Moved back to Entry per author's request

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