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Dancing

Post 1

kif

If I could hold you one more time
and feel your dancing arms in mine.
If we could once more take the floor,
and move in music as before.
If we could just roll back the years
and lose our aches and pains and tears.
If we could swoop and turn and glide.
dipping and swaying on music's tide.
If I could clasp your body tight
and dance with you all through the night.
If just once more a waltz time beat
could take the music to our feet
If a foxtrot's elegance
could once more our hearts entrance
If samba's throbbing gaity
could make our limbs dance young and free.
If the tango full of of love
could make our spirits soar above
the ravages of times decay;
then we could dance the years away.


Dancing

Post 2

Teuchter

smiley - wah

Keep dancing in your dreams, kif smiley - cuddle


Dancing

Post 3

kif

smiley - smiley


Dancing

Post 4

Cry_Havoc

My dear, I feel exactly the same way. I had to read your poem in a rush, because it brought tears to my eyes. Dancing was the one thing that brought me true JOY! and with my back hurt, I can't do so much as the Twist!smiley - wahsmiley - wahsmiley - wah
Love the Poem! Will treasure it always.smiley - cheerup


Dancing

Post 5

katkodl

Hello Kif!

I read in Cali’s journal about your poem, and she said so many nice things about it so that I decided that I have to look it up myself. It’s beautiful indeed! I admire people who are able to get the rhythms correctly, and also create a nice rhyme without making it sound goofy! A fine piece of poetry! smiley - rose

katkodl smiley - blackcat


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Post 6

kif

Thank you Kat for your kind words
Much appreciated
smiley - biggrin
Kif


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