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Ripples in the eye

Post 1

dancingbuddha

wordless, wandering, waveless sea
soundless speaking, endless be
i spent my days wandering there...
i left my footprints in the air

faces shell-like, sounding smiles
laughing tears, walking miles
i kicked the earth to see it fly,
hit a whisper passing by

black reflections, sunken fears
sights and sounds from fallen years
torn desires, agony stirred
long i listened, this i heard

and just when i'd turned to go,
a laugh did leap and catch me so,
mountain light, music free
drinking kiss, crashing sea

"Here's another - i drink to thee!"
i sought you,
found me

broken winds, passions still,
i can never really drink my fill
flower child, wait awhile,
will come again to see you smile...

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Author's Note: Does anybody understand this?


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Post 2

dim12trav

Yes and no.

Ineffability means that words dont do it justice, but I "grok" it.

Any Zen that can be caught and explained by words is not Zen.

Do not ask for explanations but experiences inspired by it.


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Post 3

dancingbuddha

yeah, that's what i meant... did u grok it?


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Post 4

dancingbuddha

considering _I_ wrote that stuff... how can you (or i) know that you did, indeed, grok it?


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Post 5

momenta

And when at last
I paused to fly,
A wandering fish
Sailed idly by;
I turned askance,
A wondering sigh,
And fell upon
My singing cry.
'Oh listen loud
And mark my touch,
A longer moment
Left as such'
The laughing flower child,
Growing old,
Turned, smiled
And winked so bold.....smiley - laugh

smiley - love


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Post 6

dancingbuddha

What's this, a competition?

smiley - biggrin Love it. [the alleged competition, the poem]

smiley - blush

-- db


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Post 7

dancingbuddha

Why don't you check out my other stuff in the AWW?

My fav is "Wisps of tea..."

-- db


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Post 8

momenta

Hehe. Glad you like.smiley - blush

Competition? Continuance? Reply?

Any or all.smiley - biggrin

Will take a look at the others.

smiley - love


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Post 9

momenta

'By mistake on a sleepy spring night' is my favourite. Love it.

Later.

smiley - love




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Post 10

dancingbuddha

smiley - brokenheart And the one i didn't want to write, too!

-- db


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Post 11

momenta

Of course! Thing is the best poetry, writing, whatever, tends to come from intensity of whatever nature.

Not sure why you didn't want to write it, but I'm glad you did.

smiley - love


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