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Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Mal Started conversation May 22, 2003
The Death's Haiku
Close to my heart; she
laughed, then fell silent.
My knife weeps, bloody.
The Funeral's Haiku
Remember: the bad
not the good, death should
be a trial: cold.
The Soul's Haiku
Souring on, eagle,
the laugh of a promise goes
unnoticed, undone.
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
azahar Posted May 22, 2003
Fnord,
You should send that to Chaiwallah - he's always posting haiku and would appreciate some of yours. You can find him somewhere on my personal page if you don't know him already. Also, he is not an 'age-ist'
Meanwhile, lighten up, sunshine 
Life is life.
You are well loved, at least here. . .
az
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Mal Posted May 22, 2003
I just felt like writing some haiku on memory, christian funerals, and heaven, I wasn't feeling *particularly* down...
Will do.
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Ram0na (seems that I've lost my sock againl) Posted May 22, 2003
Sorry I couldn't resist contributing,
New stones remember
While good meadows would settle
Doves sometimes love ghosts
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
azahar Posted May 22, 2003
hey - just saw that you'd been to Chai's haiku thread five days ago.
so you knew who he was all along.
he's lovely.
az
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Mal Posted May 22, 2003
Nice one, Ram0na, very touching and visual. COntribute away, friend.
Az - actually I must admit I was stalking you, and found that thread through your conversations page.
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Ram0na (seems that I've lost my sock againl) Posted May 22, 2003
Thank you.
Thunderstorms pass streams
Wonderful horses taste flames
Those thunderstorms weep
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Mal Posted May 24, 2003
Like Azahar said, you oughta send this in to researcher Chaiwallah, he's dead keen on stuff like this. If you can't find him, go to the thread "Wet Day Haiku" in my most recent conversations.
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
azahar Posted May 24, 2003
And you, Fnord, might be interested in my 'happy?' thread . . .
az
Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
Mal Posted May 24, 2003
Meh, I was stalking over at yours a few minutes ago and looked at it and decided to go back to it. So here goes......
And if you're still into disliking Christians, go to my Is the Christian God good or evil? thread.
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Finality: The Soliloquoy Triptych
- 1: Mal (May 22, 2003)
- 2: azahar (May 22, 2003)
- 3: Mal (May 22, 2003)
- 4: Ram0na (seems that I've lost my sock againl) (May 22, 2003)
- 5: azahar (May 22, 2003)
- 6: Mal (May 22, 2003)
- 7: Ram0na (seems that I've lost my sock againl) (May 22, 2003)
- 8: Mal (May 24, 2003)
- 9: azahar (May 24, 2003)
- 10: Mal (May 24, 2003)
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