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Ways to keep your legs warm
Bernadette Lynn_ Home Educator Started conversation Mar 11, 2003
I've been given this article to edit, and have made a couple of minor changes, for which I'd like your approval. The new version is at A891083
Ways to keep your legs warm
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Mar 11, 2003
It's looking good. 
The only suggestion I'd have would be about this sentence:
"Unfortunately, today's society tends to look oddly on men who wear tights, so this option is restricted to women, and certain groups of men - the army, steeplejacks, jockeys, bikers - where the wearing of tights has either become accepted professional apparel, or where adverse comments carry a risk."
Personally, I'd remove the comma after the word 'women', as I think it would be read smoother that way (as well as be more grammatically correct). But it's definitely not a big deal.
Thanks for the good job!
Mikey
Ways to keep your legs warm
Bernadette Lynn_ Home Educator Posted Mar 12, 2003
I'll send it back to the editors, then. Thanks for the comment.
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