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Subbing John Deacon
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Jul 20, 2013
Hiya SashaQ! I'm subbing your excellent article on John Deacon, the copy which will go live is A87801285 which you need to subscribe to
Thanks for writing it, I enjoyed subbing it and I learned something about one of the greatest British bands ever!
If you'll read through the version I have edited A87801285 and approve my tweaks I'll return it to the Eds for final polish stage
Galaxy Babe 
Subbing John Deacon
SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 20, 2013
Thanks Galaxy Babe
Is there a link that can be added to The Beatles? Maybe A257302 (Am I right in thinking you're a Beatles fan? If so, especial sorry for my forgetting to include a link!)
The sentence "He got the job." could be expanded to "His skills impresssed [Brian, Roger and Freddie]*, so he got the job."
*or [the others] or something
Otherwise looks good to me!
Subbing John Deacon
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jul 22, 2013
I've added that link and sorry, but no, you've confused me with Bluebottle
Elvis and Motown are more my bag
I've tweaked/expanded that sentence for you
Must be ready for final polish then,
GB
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