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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Hi Sasha,

I'm your sub editor for How to grow and care for Saintpaulia - the African Violet smiley - biggrin The new one is here A87800385 don't forget to subscribe smiley - winkeye

This is a really brill entry and not much I can add to it. Just a couple of points, mind, on first read through.

smiley - biro Saintpaulia is named after Walter von Saint Paul, who found the plant, and his father, who was President of the German Dendrological Society and who sent the plants to a botanical garden to be scientifically studied for the first time in 1892.

This sounds a bit clumsy, I'll have a think about a possible rewording.

smiley - biro There are various types of African Violet, ranging from micro (3in or 7cm) to large (12in or 30cm) in size.
to
smiley - orib I'll remove the 'in size' I think

Saintpaulia teitensis - first discovered in the Teita Hills of Kenya, and has a sprawling habit (loving the sprawling habit smiley - biggrin

I'm going to have to see if I can gets myself an African Violet, now (although I do tend to kill things smiley - sadface)


Subbing Saintpaulia

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SashaQ - happysad

Hi Magwitch smiley - biggrin

Thanks for your message - that all sounds fine!

smiley - ok


Subbing Saintpaulia

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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Sorry, mad couple of weeks.

I've been chewing it over, rewording and restructuring but I can't actually think of a better way to word that sentence, so I think I'll alone. smiley - biggrin

Linky hunting has been fruitless as well. You've got 11 internal ones, so that'll have to do.smiley - silly

If you're completely happy with this, I can send it back for final polish and piccies.

Mags


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SashaQ - happysad

Thanks Mags - I'm happy with it smiley - ok

smiley - biggrin


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Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

smiley - cool

I shall look forward to seeing this on the Front Page, then Sasha smiley - biggrin


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