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Hi Skanky

If there's anything I can do to ease your load, I'm willing to help.

Take Care

opti

Thanks, Opti

I'm getting there, but I have precious little time free at the moment. I do have about a third of the Entry written, though, so I might just get there in the next week or so.

That's

which entry is that?

I've been working on a Uni project at A27731720, but I've stumbled on the last one:

A33585708

I'm finding it very difficult to write it in a way that I like. The others took a few days each and flowed quite nicely, but I've been working on the last one for two or three months.

Hmmm....have you looked at it solidly for a number of months or taken long breaks away from it and come back to look at it every so often.

Recently, when I've done stuff for performance and its not been rhythmic or rhymes and I'm not happy with it I've read it out to others and they've actually liked it. So running your entry past people could be helpful...I'll have a read.

Both - I've tried working on it solidly, and taking breaks. I think the next part is perhaps the hardest part of all to write. I want to tell it more in the sort of way I would tell a story around a fire, and I think I've achieved that in the others. If you'd like to have a read, I'd appreciate it

I like the Entry, but I do feel that you could write a bit more about why <>. For example, <>

I haven't even got to 1492 yet - that's the next bit

...the bit I was banging my head on the desk about last night because I couldn't write about it

first off don't hold back put everything on the page for us both to see. Then the more critical part of you can play around with it later. If you were able to tell it to me by voice what would you say? Go for it.

You're probably right. I could just write a crap paragraph and come back to it later.

Correction I am right

You might be right there