h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Skanky.

I'm subbing this for you. I do like doing your's...and Alex's because now't much needs doing to them

Anyways, there's just one sentence that I'm having a problem with. It doesn't flow quite right.

"In fact, a very similar mutation to that which gave a primate thousands of miles away on an unconnected continent the same advantage."


Any suggestions?

I posted a reply to this just before meltdown; it was here ten minutes ago, and it's gone again now!

Shall we wait to see if it returns?

I think it's gone Skanky...gone into the ether. Disappeared in a cloud of smoke.

I'll be though until you repost it

I think I suggested:

'In fact, a very similar mutation gave a primate thousands of miles away on an unconnected continent the same advantage.'

But I asked for a link to the Edited version, just to check this would fit in with the sentences before and after

And I said thanks very much for the compliment and your work

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Just checked that line, and it looks fine - I reckon it's a goer

I've returned it for you

Thank you very much - I'll see you on the Front Page then! Thanks for your work

Oh, btw...I'll be down your way over the Christmas period. You should e-mail over to me the name of your hotel and we might pop in to annoy you