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Short story for review if you're interested
lady_poisonedcandi Started conversation Feb 18, 2005
Hi there, I have published a couple of pieces for review and wondered if you'd mind having a look since you seem pretty honest. I'm new to writing and still at school so, unsurprisingly, my work is quite immature and I'm obviously a novice! However, I have had some lovely comments for people on the site and think I could do with "honest brutality" before my head inflates too much!!
If you have the time, feel free to check out my personal space. "Polar Empress" is poetry but the others are short fiction.
Short story for review if you're interested
RK Posted Feb 18, 2005
Yes, I'll take a peek.
I think you meant: 'pretty and honest'.
RK
Short story for review if you're interested
lady_poisonedcandi Posted Feb 18, 2005
Yes, of course I did. 
Short story for review if you're interested
RK Posted Feb 18, 2005
I've had a look at some of your work and I'm afraid I am unable to help you.
Your command of english is fine, but your skills as a story-teller are still under-developed. The only way to improve on this, is to keep writing about the things that you care about or interest you.
RK
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lady_poisonedcandi Posted Feb 18, 2005
Okay, well thank you for taking the time to look, I appreciate it. And I intend to keep writing for a few years yet so here's hoping I show signs of improvement!
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